Throughout the grand pattern of things you receive an A+ just for effort. Exactly where you lost us was first on all the facts. You know, as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more true here. Having said that, let me reveal to you just what did do the job. The article (parts of it) can be pretty persuasive and this is possibly the reason why I am taking an effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, although I can notice a jumps in reason you make, I am not confident of how you seem to unite the points which in turn make your final result. For now I will, no doubt yield to your issue but trust in the foreseeable future you link the dots much better.